===== From sshaw@fas.harvard.edu: The image gets distored to the edges; it might have been better to narrow the field of the camera. Good job on the mask, but my favorite element in the scene is Anubis. About the painting on the wall in the left half of the scene: if I am seeing it correctly, the edges of the image map are quite evident. Maybe making the image map larger so that it would fill the wall would eliminate that. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Nice composition ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: I like this a lot, but the the human figure is not quite convincing. I think the complete scene would have been better without him. The image map on the wall seems to suppress the bump map of its surrounding part of the wall. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Almost a fine image, but misses the mark with its confusing visual scales and indeterminate lighting. Image is divided into three disconnected sections. Good use of texture. Quite historic. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: An important event in History. The image is a bit confusing, maybe ambiguous lighting. ===== From 101741.541@compuserve.com: Your professional competences shows up here, and helps give some depth to the image. The sand/dusty ambience is quite good... I'm not too sure about the size of the painting, it seems huge, but you're more qualified than me in that area. A better lighting would help make think clearer and reinforce the ambience.