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From brendthess@aol.com:
The ship contrails need some work.  Even where the image implies that the ships
are turning, the contrails are straight and too cylindrical.

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From kistler@nevada.edu:
Love the bird!  But I don't know about the water.
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From nijman@nmtrix.com:
Nice fog

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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Nice bird, nice theme.  Soap in the water?
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From jull43@ij.net:
Perhaps it is more unbelievable that the bird is clearly spotlighted. 

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From sdevet@istar.ca:
The lighting and hanging moss looks really nice, as does the bird.

The wall texture seems a bit flat, while the rocks in the water are just
the opposite (perhaps a bit too much variation?)

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From bobfranke@halcyon.com:
Nice job on the bird and atmosphere.  For improvement 
try working on the texture for the walls of the cave.  
Also the hanging plants look much better than the ones 
on the ground.


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From file:
An interesting idea that could be refined, particulary the textures.  The bird
disrupts the picture.  It appears almost as if it were cut out of some other
place and plopped onto the image.


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From file:
Wow, nice modeling on the bird. Atmosphere looks nice too.