===== From nijman@nmtrix.com: Maybe you could change the camera so the building would cross the horizon. Or use some fog. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: I like the architecture a lot. But the sharp-edged horizon line bothers me. ===== From autumn@sinbad.net: Difficult to assign a concept score to this image, given the sparse explanation of your text file. Beyond that, it is a rather pleasing image. ===== From sdevet@istar.ca: Nice! The sunset looks very good, and a lot of work has gone into modelling the buildings. I tihnk it could be improved by a more subtle water/sky boundary, and maybe more complex textures. ===== From file: Image lacks depth. Nice colors and nice model.