===== From gregj56590@aol.com: I'm dividing each of your scores by zero! ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Very nicely detailed... I think you've learnt a lot from the comments you got on your first entry! Nice to see slightly dirty surfaces and the chairs not all lined up in geometrical precision (though a little random rotation would have added as well). What's more, the connection to the topic is clear and even humorous. Well done. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Good! ===== From mriser@datacomm.ch: (x-y) is zero, so you divide through zero. I got the point :) Math saved. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Perhaps a bit overlighted, but nice and funny. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: I like the concept. Good pose. Many of the colors are too-bright (such as the chairs, doorknob, and the blue suit). Interesting texture on the floor. You might also want to zoom in to tighten the composition a bit: the emphasis here is the classroom, but clearly you wanted to depict the man and the blackboard. Also, moving the camera off to one side would add interest. ===== From clem@dhol.com: The modelling is pretty good and the pose of the Poser figure is well chosen. The texturing isn't bad, but I can't really see the chalkboard texturing you mention. The yellow waxy buildup on the floor is a very good idea, but the color should be a bit more subtle. That bright, it suggests something more like urine stains. ===== From sdevet@istar.ca: Ah ha! No matter what numbers you use, the third line will always simplify to 0 = 0, and the error creeps in. 0 = 0 gives no information about x or y... Subtle. :) Yay! Love the image, for this reason alone. Person seems a bit jaggy. The chairs might have looked a bit better if they had some random alignment to them, to make it look a bit more used. ===== From file: Notable for originality, composition