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From chris@bluelectrode.com:
Um...yeah, ok.

Well...looks like you modeled everything well enough but nothing seems to match.
 Conceptualized around a dream?...I guess I'll buy that.  However, it's almost
like you didn't plan what you were going to model.  Even dreams are structured
from pre-imagined ideas or experiences.  This just looks busy and confusing.

Better luck next time.

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From bill@apocalypse.org:
The scene seems a but jumbled, it lacks a sense of 
composition.  The colors hold some appeal though.

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From rbyman@rockies.net:
Nicely surrealistic.

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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Thanks for the bilingual description.
The whole effect of all the pieces together is distracting, perhaps with too
many different styles thrown together. 
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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
I don't understand it but I find it somewhat attractive

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From tom@tomandlu.force9.co.uk:
Very confusing and hard to read as a picture.

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From ameede@madmac.com:
I like the idea that you pulled imagery from a dream, and I can say that you
have some serious dreams, there is quite alot of detail.  The image almost
resembles a collage.  I felt this image deserved high marks for your
persistence in interpretation, creating, critique, and then changing, if
necessary, based off your self-criticism of the work.

ameede@madmac.com
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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
I'm not too sure what to think about this. It is weird. Of courses dreams can
go
to extremes in that respect.
Artistically the image lacks a sense of depth (the shadows on the house for
instance give very little information).
Maybe because the colours are too saturated.
I think the artistic touch must be backed by more technique ... better textures
and lighting. I understand it is not an easy job though.
A strange and curious concept.

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From albiaprime@aol.com:
Technical - a lot of good technical, and like a dream perspective is all over
the place
          so a good technical translation of your visioin
Artistic - too busy, a nice image but too cluttered
Theme - a different sort of garden, on topic

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Nice palm. I'm not sure the fire, light beams, and crystal tower in the middle
really work in this composition - it seems like they've just been thrown in
somehow. Some of the entries are too sparse and empty - I think this has gone a
little the other way - there's just too much to look at and it doesn't seem to
fit together properly. I think concentrating on just the plants and the house
would have given you a better product.