===== From bill@apocalypse.org: the leaves aren't bent enough I think - they seem flat/2D. ===== From YaelParis@operamail.com: I dislike the textures of your submission. it's really sad because a good texture will certainly improve a lot the background as well as the chair. ===== From tom@tomandlu.force9.co.uk: The lighting is nice, but the grass doesn't work and the background needs more detail. The chair material doesn't work for me. ===== From ameede@madmac.com: ameede@madmac.com ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Nice ... but. ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Technical - nice job on the treebark and the chair. Artistic - unfortunate that the tree leaves are just simple triangles Theme - a garden of sorts ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: What this really needs is more in the background besides bare hills - it looks like a garden that ends abruptly and then has nothing outside it. The plants are okay but the grass is a bit sparse. The lighting also needs to be a bit softer - the shadows are very sharp and quite dark.