===== From bill@apocalypse.org: I like the close-up shot better. ===== From soulmates@gci.net: This scene has great potential, but I think some more work is needed both on textures and lighting. This image cries out for radiosity. :{) Congratulations on your progress to date. ===== From YaelParis@operamail.com: The models are good but the lightning isn't. There's no shadow and the texture look strange and "synthetic" ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: Great concept but looks cartoonish ===== From ianshumsky@hotmail.com: You seem to have submitted the same image twice... As the text files are the same, I presume this was by accident, so I've voted the same for both images. ===== From tom@tomandlu.force9.co.uk: I liked the rather plain enviroment for this scene, but felt more interesting lighting wouldn't be out of place. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: OK, you submitted this work twice in a slightly different shape, I'll vote on that one and dismiss the other as the other does not look as nice as a whole. This is a very good concept and a pretty good composition. I like it. Although the positioning of this 'stool' or support the garden in the room seems a bit odd. I would see it fit closer to the far corner, but granted, this would make it harder to make a nice shot of it. One of the better submissions. ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Technical - very nice work on the plants, the little planter and table Artistic - I kept wishing I could have a closer look at the little garden in the planter! Theme - a different but nice interpretation of the theme ===== From file: The over ambience of all surfaces here and the lack of shadows make it hard to relate depth.