===== From loomsbury@yahoo.com: This idea had potential. The modeling on the ants could use some more detail. The dirt looks ok, but it looks more like an upper atmosphere view of a desert, minus the interesting looking ant hill on the right. And of course, the water drop. That could have used some work too. It looks kind of like some sort of oily goo. Now, for your first image, this is very nice. I have to admit, your modeling skills are beyond what mine where when I started. Keep it up. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Not bad for a first image. I too am new to ray tracing and I have entered and image for my first time. Your image looks ok but would be improved if you pointed the abdomin down. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: I would rather have seen you do a box with windows in it, rather than submit something that is very loosely based on the topic. The competition is every two months so there is always time for the next round. Sorry if i sound a little harsh. A good place to go for learning and help is the povray newsgroup. You can find out more about that at www.povray.org ===== From Stickgod01@aol.com: The ants could use some work. I like your idea of an anthill being another, different type of city. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice concept.... the water.... looked more like a piece of plastic. ===== From mwsny001@mweb.co.za: A nice picture, but I think it is a bit off the topic. Pity the neck of the vase is closed. ===== From tglover@nettally.com: good soil! Ants are a little odd shaped -- check out a readily available book for kids "Monster Book of Ants" or some such. I used some of the pics in there while modelling my ant in landmark round. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: The texturing and shaping of the ground is nice. The ants look good, although not totally realistic. The water droplets don't look bad, but maybe should be a little irregular in their shaping, and while the texture is cool, I'm not sure how realistic it is. I kinda like the texturing on the vase too. ===== From tonyv@iafrica.com: It would have been better to wait for another round of the competition. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: The ants probably ought to be carrying leaves or some other food; that would add more colour and detail to the image. ===== From patrick.joyal@sympatico.ca: One advice I've got : try to respect the topic...