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From jknepley@chisp.net:
Anti-alias, please.

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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
The ripples look nice, however, the water is too silvery.  Other than that, make some of your own models next time.

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From pmccombs@hotmail.com:
Could use anti-aliasing. Seems a bit of a stretch of the topic, to me anyway.

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From scarmig@ohmss.com:
Great work on the water and lighting, especially the dome effect and walls.  Difficult to understand what you're trying to say about 'the city'.

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From tony@j4tb.com:
The background curtains look excellent. The ladies are pretty good. The water rippling around the ladie in the bath is a nice touch. The water looks clear and the dome reflection looks like the bath floor. Try adding some translucency to the water and perhaps a spot of blue. Also make the bath bottom non reflective and the water reflective this would make it look awsome I think. A very creative work.

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From jd@surveyor.in-berlin.de:
Antialialising would had helped to improve the image, some thinkin on the
lightning instead of thinking on the angles would had helped to decrease 
the rendering time.

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From Stickgod01@aol.com:
Would probably be more appropriate to the theme if it involved less naked ladies and more city/bathhouse stuff. Water looks too clear. Good idea for the bathhouse though.



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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:
This does not tie into the concept of city.... at least not strongly.
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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Nice eye for composition, and some good elements here, 
but it's hard to judge how good it looks given the small 
size and lack of anti-aliasing.  The lighting looks to be 
on the right track, although the main pool is kind of 
glaring.

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From tonyv@iafrica.com:
The water seems to be far too clear.

Were the baths segregated by gender?

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From peter@table76.demon.co.uk:
Larger windows, with sketchily-modelled buildings outside, would have helped
suggest the scene was in a city, I think.