===== From loomsbury@yahoo.com: Perhaps you should have put some transports or something flying between them, to add detail. The cities need more detail too. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: I like your cities and your mountains are nicely done. The water looks realistic but seems to destroy the depth perception. I think if you took the closest city and moved it further from the water that would help. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: Interesting but not a standout. Just too plain ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice concept... almost like mine. Water is nice... the atmosphere adds to the ambience. The buildings needed a bit of a lived in look.... look more like blocks stuck there rather than habitations. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: An interesting and somewhat surreal interpretation. The water texture looks nice in the distance, but seems a bit too obvious in the foreground. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Artistically very nice, but this is some weird alien cities seen from afar - it has none of the feeling of the hustle and bustle of "The City".