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From jknepley@chisp.net:
Good detail in the modelling.  I would have gone with less ambient light, and the opaque portions of the structure are too smooth.  The ground is smoother than I would have liked, and you need more vegitation.

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From loomsbury@yahoo.com:
This looks ok, but textures need work.  The sea floor needs something, like more life, perhaps a heightfield.  The subs need more detail.  Other than that I think, it looks nice.

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From pmccombs@hotmail.com:
Good image, overall.  Keep working on the media, it can do some really neat things if you can master it.

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From scarmig@ohmss.com:
Great idea and some very nice modelling.  I don't really feel underwater though, perhaps a wavey normal applied to camera lens would give that distorted feeling.

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From tony@j4tb.com:
I like the transport tubes. Actually I think the lighting is good. An underwater city would have a lot of artificial light and it would be reflected around much more in the water. The scuba guys are very nicely done. The composition seems sort of out of scale. The buldings seem too small and the scuba guys seem sort of big. Also the plants seem unrealistic.  
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From whhale@nvl.army.mil:
I miss my old monitor where I could just reach over and turn down the brightness...now I have to wait for the bill to come back from congress!!!
You put a lot of nice features in this one.  I have one gripe, Not enough media.  there needs to be some dirt and dust and fishes.  I understand that this shtuff can send the parsing time through the roof (see my ruins entry wh_ruins.jpg) especially if sPatch is your modeler.  To reduce parse time I have been converting my sPach models into DFX and then to pov.  Cuts it in half.

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From Stickgod01@aol.com:
Needs more of an underwater feel. Perhaps some fish closer to the camara? 
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From christophe.bouffartigue@libertysurf.fr:
Good effort for the composition. The modelling is a little to simple.
But the weakest point is the texturing.


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From marlo.steed@uleth.ca:

I liked the idea, nice tubbed corridors.... the road seemed a bit out of place.
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From StephenF@whoever.com:
Nice scene.  I like the tubular walkway, and the fencing 
around the object in the lower right corner.  Some of the 
small details could use some work, though... it looks like 
the truck's wheels are sunk into the road, and the 
bubbles seem too white (although the placement is 
good). 

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
This is a good take on the underwater city idea. I like to see the workings
that make a place a city, not just the buildings that form its exterior.
This would be improved by some more detailed modelling and showing a few more
of the activities going on... more vehicles and people and maybe some fish.