===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: Sky needs detail. ===== From pbourke@swin.edu.au: I like it, one of the better sun reflections. The light on the boat looks good also. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice looking image... like the reflection on the water... the horizon is a bit too harsh. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Your scene has a "modelic" look. Though this look doesn't do much for your technical score I really like the image. It convey's a sense of peace. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Color combination is pleasing to the eye. ===== From nitschk@ranke.be.schule.de: Could be a very nice image, but the technicl aspect should be better, more details etc. to make it look more real. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Not bad. Too blue a sky maybe. The boat is missing some level of details (beams for instance). ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Interesting use of color. For the most part it seems to work, but I don't really care for the banding of colors on the land. The water does seem to have a nice liquid feel to it. The boat looks a touch simplistic, though. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: As you say in the text file, the image has to tell a story, and as simple as this picture is it certainly does that. One thing that may help the narrative would be a small rowing boat far off to the right further away from the camera than the main boat and in shadow. The sea looks particularly unrealistic but fits the scene well. Maybe the sun should be samller, and how about area lights in front of the boat, the lower section of the hull seems to be in deep hard shadow. The yellow light spilling out of the boat onto the water works really well and seems to warm the image up a bit giving it a slightly tropical feel. Try making the whole scene a bit darker so as not to mess up the light from the boat or anything else just lower the gamma in the scene file. Great work so far. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Who taught you to mix paint? :)