===== From elvish_archer@mailcity.com: good splashing water but the color wasn't matching to the light house, the lighthouse was more brightness than the sea, I dont know it's my feeling or not but is there a man at the top? ===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: Opaque seawater textures hurt the art some, otherwise excellent ===== From pbourke@swin.edu.au: Almost makes it near the bottom of the image, it is ruined a bit by the top of the lighthouse. ===== From panthus@xtra.co.nz: The image seems empty (lonely?) and a bit too brown. The roil and spume of the ocean is ambitious and the figure looks good. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: + Excellent texture on the lighthouse. The water really "works" too, and the models are good. Very good picture. - The sky is a bit too flat (shouldn't there be a hint of clouds) and the rocks should probably be more shiny since they're wet. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice image. Perhaps neeeded a light. ===== From douge@nls.net: Nice looking image. The splashes look good, as does the texturing on the lighthouse. The background seems to add a lot to the atmosphere of a wet, foggy, dismal day. The water surface and the rocks seem a little unrealistic... partially because of the colors. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Your sky combined with the waves give the sense a storm is near. A very nice lighthouse. Your person seems a little flat and your water doesn't look quite right, seems a little too foamy. ===== From nitschk@ranke.be.schule.de: In general the idea of this image is good, but the technical aspect could be better, e.g. the sky looks not like one. ===== From whhale@nvl.army.mil: Thanks for the history lesson. I enjoy reading these for that purpose ===== From bbowen@cswnet.com: So, how did you do the foam? Very nice overall. That perturbated cone effect works well to add "settling" to the structure. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Very good try at the splashing and foam, but think (IMVHO) they need some more work still. Nice story. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: This has a very nice, stylized look... almost like a painting. The lighthouse looks great. The spray might need a little tweaking to make it look more natural. The person is a nice touch and looks good from a distance. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: I really love this image. The only things I would change is make it a bit darker and create a better texture for the rocks at the bottom. The spray looks very good, this is another image that has a hand painted feel to it which goes well with scenes that include a rough stormy sea. Here in the UK all lighthouses are automated, so I can't be a lighthouse keeper, guess I'll have to have a career rethink. Sad but true. ===== From went@netcourrier.com: Congratulations ! ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Good job. The sky texture is well thought out, and the non-cylinder lighthouse is effective and subtle. I enjoyed your description of how you built everything. The vertical lighthouse is dull visually, but you handled it well with the sky and it's top.