===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: The scuba gear is lacking somewhat... or was that your intention all along? ===== From pbourke@swin.edu.au: Interesting, but.... I guess I just didn't like it even though it seems quite good technically. ===== From a.vannini@mclink.it: Try to remove figure's genitalia, the next time ;-) ===== From panthus@xtra.co.nz: Good models and interesting reflections on the top surface of the water. Maybe some bubbles from the subs would have counter-pointed the lack of life in the guy? or (I know it's cliche) searching spotlights? ===== From dvnss@mega.ist.utl.pt: Strange, but very well done ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Couldn't quite figure this one out... nice lighting and interesting angle. ===== From bbowen@cswnet.com: The texture on the 'man' makes him look mechanical, robotic. First time I've ever seen a robot with such a prominent set of er. . equipment. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Ok, but I'm not sure this is not just taking advantage of the subject for an unrelated matter. Some more comments may have helped me understand better. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice use of camera angle to make the figure more imposing. The machines look good. Doesn't really look like the objects are underwater, though. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: A nice image, but I think you need to decide which way your going to go with it and then make some big changes. Either go for a realism/adverture-film type look and improve all the textures, add items of interest like fish, make the surface of the water more visible and interesting etd. Or go for the cartoon/comic look and try to flatten it a bit, and put some outragious cliche in there like a shark bearing it's teeth or a bomb exploding with a boom bubbel etc. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: The texture on the man is a little ambiguous, as well as what the emergancy actually _is_. Good luck with the comics.