===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: L'isle a besoin d'un slope_map. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: More detail on the sub (get rid of the blue, it does not go) would have added to an otherwise nice image. ===== From tony@j4tb.com: A great picture but I am not sure what the blue things are. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Cool concept. Scale of ship wrt/ island doesn't seem right. And it's difficult to understand what island _is_. ===== From angelaperry@webcombo.net: A very lovely rendition of the Nautilus. The ship turned out great! A little more work on the background and water would definitely bring some very high marks. ~A. Perry ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: I recognised Captain Nemo's ship at once ;-)) The island is not very good. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: The shaping on the submarine looks good, and the sky is pretty nice. The texturing on the water works well in the background but doesn't look as good close up. The land could use some work to make it look less spiky- looking. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: The water looks a bit basic, but the colour's good, I like the rocks. The boat isn't recognisable as anything in particular, maybe do some more modelling on it and improve the textures a bit. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: The contrast between the Nautilus and the sky works better than the contrast against the mountain. If the dark reflection in the water would extend to the bottom left corner, it would make a visual shift from light to dark (from right to left), which would also increase the contrast of the ship. The goal is to draw attention to the ship. Getting closer to the Nautilus can achieve the same effect. Translation from http://worldlingo.com/wlservlets/Translate: Le contraste entre Nautilus et ciel fonctionne mieux que le contraste contre la montagne. Si la r_flexion fonc_e dans l'eau se prolongerait au coin gauche inf_rieur, elle ferait un passage visuel _ partir de la lumi_re _ l'obscurit_ (de droite _ gauche), qui augmenterait _galement le contraste du bateau. Le but est d'appeler l'attention sur le bateau. Obtenir plus pr_s de Nautilus peut r_aliser le m_me effet.