===== From digitalburn@totalise.co.uk: could do without the stones + splash i think. th sun seems a little round and bright for this time of day. good otherwise. ===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: Some texture variety on the ships might have helped some, but a good image. ===== From pbourke@swin.edu.au: A very nice feel to this image, good use of colour, nice waves. The splash of water needs some work. ===== From dvnss@mega.ist.utl.pt: Why do people always exagerate the gold in sunsets. I guess that's what you love in susnsets... ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice work... like that ambience. The light on the sails doesn't seem right... the spray looks a bit artifical (straight). ===== From tony@j4tb.com: Your spray effect look more like fog. You might try several(100) placed spheres for better effect. Great techniqe on lightsource. I will have to try it. ===== From a.swan@ucl.ac.uk: Oh, I think you succeeded alright. Absolutely stunning. ===== From angelaperry@webcombo.net: I can't help it--I loved the glowing sails. Although this picture would probably never exist in reality, it is a beautiful and imaginative drawing, with wonderful colors. Lovely! ~A. Perry ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Not bad. The contrast with the sun is pretty good. The wave splashing is better kept dark :-) ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good use of color... the sky looks very nice. The ships have a metallic look to them which is pretty cool, and the shaping is nice. I think the scene would have looked much better without the spray effect... it doesn't look that realistic to me and really detracts from the overall look of the scene. ===== From sjlen@ndirect.co.uk: Great scene but totally spoiled by the spary and splashes in the foreground, they look so unrealistic compared to the rest of the image. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Not really failed or succeeded. . . the symbols are all there, but the linear composition and centeredness of the sun make it difficult to view after the scene has been understood. ===== From file: The color palette is very pretty, and I like the viewpoint near the rocks. Somehow the ships seem out of scale, like models, though.