===== From charliemc@prodigy.net: Good work. ===== From tim_cutho@smileyface.com: I think the 4WD could have done with some more texturing. Otherwise, it's great! ===== From luisvaloyes@malditasea.zzn.com: me parecen muy buenos los modelos de los autos, pero creo que el resto se ve demasiado regular-geometrico, y faltarian algunos detalles en la escena, como vidrios en las ventanas de los edificios y algunas otras cosas, pero en general es una buena escena... ===== From hgregory3@aol.com: Artistic - Nice image, but the marble sidewalk, its side facing us is slightly distracting as texture is "too" open, needs to be compact. Love the cars! Technical - Nice construction. Suggest you need window frames as glass is rarely, if ever, set straight into brick (minor oversite here). Concept - It's a contrast. ===== From steve@neurotrain.com: A 10 T 11 C 10 I think many things could have been done to improve the look of the image. 1. Get the cars out from behind the fence - it is very very distracting 2. Proportions are way off. The gutter/pipe shadow is huge! The balcony railing are too thick. the bricks are huge. 3. Colours seem extra vibrant - everything seems shiny 4. Purple skies are unusual to me. 5. The diacotomy between the excellent cars and horrible road and sidewalk Technically: Cars look great. You can model really well if you take the time. Perhaps next time concentrate on a few objects rather than do so many. Everything but the cars looks strange or unfinished. Concept is ok. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice job on the cars... very impressive. The buildings look good. Nice work with the lighting. The texture on the curb looks rather odd, though, and given its prominence in the scene, it's rather distracting. I also would have spent more time on the fence (it would work well from a distance, I think, but looks too simple in close-up.) ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Quite nice car models, although it seems you made the key models before the competition. Too bad they are a little obscured by the fences. The blocking fence makes me want to look up to the upper half of the building, which is clearly not the focus of the scene. Some elements of the scene (the pipe, bricks, balcony railings) seem to be a little "heavy". ===== From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za: The fence in front makes it hard to recognise the cars. Since the cars are the whole point of the immage, that wasnt such a good idea. The spotlights on the billboard at the top are too bright. A wider beam and softer falloff value would have been better. Nice idea tho. ===== From fabien.mosen@skynet.be: The cars looks good, they should be presented better, not hidden behind a disturbing grid, and with a better background than this very ordinary black building. ===== From file: Notable for modelling, textures