===== From charliemc@prodigy.net: Good idea. ===== From elvish_archer@mailcity.com: I like the concept but u must add something else for more extreme, I feel (perhaps it's only my feeling) you make the view too close ===== From steve@neurotrain.com: A 16 T 12 C 20 very nicely staged. I especially like the mountains there in present time, but almost invisble behind the smog! The boxiness of the city is the biggest problem. The one other thing is the in out box on the right. It's shadow, along with where you place the signature (very nice trick),makes the signature tesseract -looking out of line. It is probably just my eye, so I didn't take any marks off. Technically - it is just a matter of practice. The building are much too box/cube like...the edges are way too sharp. Excellent concept. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: As always, lots of small details help make this scene. (I like the fact that the trees in the center have grown over the years.) Some of the textures could stand to be more detailed, I think. Good choice of concept. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: It's nice to see both sides of the contrast, and be able to compare them point-by-point. Scene, though, seems to be a little too "contrived" or "posed" for my taste. ===== From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za: The bigger and older trees are a nice touch. The smog is a nice touch too ===== From file: Notable for composition ===== From file: Notable for composition