===== From charliemc@prodigy.net: I love pizza. ===== From elvish_archer@mailcity.com: nice touch but for adding the feel of distance between pyramid and the resto u must make the pyramid darker and add some fog ===== From sammy@cube.net: nice pic. The lensflare on the lamppost ist distracting though. Bye, Sammy ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: This got me laughing - a great take on the topic. Is the lens flare supposed to be outside the light like that? ===== From hgregory3@aol.com: Technical - Excellent work on the moon and the sky, however, part of the lens flare on the street light is very distracting to the rest of the image. Concept - An interesting choice for your contrast. ===== From steve@neurotrain.com: A 12 T 12 C 18 You are starting off well. Artiscally you should read about the best way to light a scene. Technically you just need practice - the middle pyramid with the "plaster" still intact shows a good sense of keeping it realistic. The proper textures would improve the image a lot. The bike and truck look pretty good. Conceptually, I like where you are going, though you should have made the dinner dirtier and have the garbages overflowing with boxes strewn around. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice concept. The lighting is interesting, and the texture on the pyramids looks good. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: A really good contrast here, but the scene is almost ruined by the out-of-place light pole (which would be much better *behind* the building) and the garish colors all over. Looks like a rush job; you are capable of better work. Too bad, this could have been a fine image. Good composition and lighting, with just the right touch of believability and incongruity. ===== From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za: Texturing ont he pyramids could ahve been more "blocky" ===== From file: Notable for lighting, originality