===== From charliemc@prodigy.net: Good work. ===== From hgregory3@aol.com: For what spare time you have from your studies, you put in a good effort. Your work shows you have potential, don't give up. (but DO keep in mind your school work comes first and high marks there in your final years will open many doors to you.) Concept - A contrast of sorts. ===== From steve@neurotrain.com: A 14 T 14 C 15 Please don't consider these remarks a slight against you. Very many of us have few hours with which to pursue our hobbies. Framed well, and good lighting. Why are the souls not crucified in the "recognized way? Why bands around ther necks shoulders and leges? I realize this might have a technical answer, but it affects the image artistically. At first I thought they were evil's minions. The devil needs to be less transparent Technically: The water looks good. the sword is pretty cool looking, but why is it stuck in the floor, and if so I think I should see a small line just on either side from the cut it made going in. The souls should have had their poses modifed slightly - I know you didn't create the model, but you should have still tweaked the meshes. Good concept ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: The fog technique you used make for an interesting effect in the background. The sky could maybe use a little work, but I like the use of color here. ===== From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za: The contrast doesnt quite come out in the image. The good side is not "good" enough so to speak.