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From charliemc@prodigy.net:
Who's winning?


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From steve@neurotrain.com:
A 12 T 13 C 8
The artisitic mark was hard to give because, at first I 
thought the transparent things were the missles and the 
lego were boats.  You shouldn't be penalized for my thick 
brain, but on the same token as the artist it is your job to 
make the picture clear to the viewer (rarely fo you get to 
add a text file for clarity).
The layout of the two missles in the foreground adds to 
the confusion, as the contrail(air wake) of the crashed 
one looks an object that is about to hit the flying one.
Technical:  the picture is good, however due to the 
relativly few objects you had, I personally expect those 
objects done very well...the splash of the fallen missle 
doesn't seem to exist, and the air wake look too simple 
and are incorrect.
Concept.  Unfortunatly, I saw no clear indication of 
contrast. I understand the idea of toys used in the act of 
war as a contrast, but that is not what I see.  At best I 
interpret a child's imagination at work...

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
I can't grasp the scale here.  Are these ships supposed to be full-sized,
and the contrast is that they are somehow made of gigantic Legos?  Or are
they normal-sized Legos, and the contrast is that the missiles are
pencil-sized?  Maybe you could add a rubber ducky or an ocean buoy to
establish the scale of the scene.

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From hfventer@ing.sun.ac.za:
Its a bit hard to distinguish the crashing missile at first.  
If it were farhter back or more prominent, it would have 
been better.