===== From : That blue stone wall won't fly. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: The brick wall texture seems out of scale. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: This does seem to lack a certain depth which would help the scene a lot. Good work on the robe, though... it looks good. The trees look rather odd, but that may be due to the lack of shadowing. ===== From mwsny001@mweb.co.za: The robe is very good! ===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Shame you didn't get the full render finished. The demoness is interesting, but I have my doubts about many of the other elements. ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Sad you could not finish the final render in time, the character looks well done, the tree technique looks very interesting too. ===== From youknow@ucan.foad.org: I do like your figure and her invitation to the hidden pathway. The scene itself could use something else but I'm at a loss as to what. Maybe a tiki torch stuck next to the figure combined with the path to the side being slightly less illuminated, or something of the sort. ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Technical:Good job on the acolyte, but the horns don't seem to fit the rest of the body. Perhaps they should have been a bit smaller at the point where they emerge from the skull. Concept: Does one worship an acolyte? ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Epistemology: This would be true if it would not but ignore the truth. I would obey if I did not but recognize that the nether region t'were not simply an assumed possibility and truly no certainty. Axiology: Wanting and obtaining sexuality in no way indicate anything BUT the 'straight and narrow', heterosexually. Maybe next time a seductive dog or chicken? Or what if admonishing sexuality were evil? Ontology: I would have to be a cow in the rut to live like her, and even then I would wear warmer clothes.