===== From : The floor texture clashes somewhat with the "humble flat" atmosphere. Darker wood with layered dirt/rot would have helped. ===== From batronyx@cadronhsa.com: I love that wall texture. The whole scene is overall very nicely detailed. The only thing I see really is a need for more variation in the skin tone of the pose model. This, however, is a common shortcoming with Poser. Perhaps a gradient slope texture oriented toward the camera to darken some areas? ===== From tony@awmcs.net: A nice interpretation. Simple yet effective ===== From bonsalva@bellsouth.net: Good peeling walls. ===== From d_chappell_link@hotmail.com: Very delicate image. Lovely. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: A stunning technical achievement, marred only by the fact that her skin texture is off compared to the highly detailed , realistic walls, for example. I also think your ambient is set a fair bit too high. I'd bet lowering that would help the image a lot. For example, with both of those light sources the end of the bed should be quite dark, as should be most of what we see of her. It would help a lot to make this scene a lot more contrasty. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice work here... the cloth objects look good, and the lighting works well to support the concept. The floorboards look good too (if a bit overly colorful). The stool seems a little large and bulky, and it looks like its legs stick into the floor. These are very small points, though... overall, the scene looks very good. ===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Excellent - the girl seems overly-perfect in the surroundings, though - plainer would have been more interesting IMHO. ===== From gshaw@monotix.co.za: Beautiful. The wall texture is very nice ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Turned out very well, all the texturing looks rather nice, it's difficult to find something to criticise, but most stuff, especially the floor looks quite clean in relation to the walls. Great work on the cloth stuff of course. ===== From youknow@ucan.foad.org: This is an absolutely beautiful image, artisitically and conceptually alike. I especially like the many, many fine touches that make this room seem real: the wall texture, the shoes and dress to the side, the picture on the wall, the slightly messy bookshelf. The only real flaw in the image is the stool, which has odd proportions (the texture also looks a bit strange). ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Artistic: Very nice image! Tres Bien!! Technical: Very good technically. Nice job on all the various pieces in the scene. I especially like the texture on the walls. Concept: Very much on topic. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Epistemology: I study, but I know that all is nothing compared to the life after death, the heavan. It shows itself to me in all the pictures from the times of the highest points of Christianity (and God, I am horny as a wet dog). Axiology: Peace is in simplicity. I find that if I do not leave childhood behind, I can be more at peace. Everything I read tells me to be demur and submissive. It seems strange that I should have to limit myself as a woman to what is most girlish in me, but God must know best. I wish I could bring myself to get laid laid laid, but I cannot find any justification of it in any of the texts. Ontology: I am a slave before my lord. I guess I'll go masteurbate. ===== From file: Notable for textures, composition, originality, lighting, modelling ===== From file: Notable for lighting ===== From file: Tres cool. Et bravo pour ton patch. Notable for modelling, lighting, composition ===== From file: Tres cool. Et bravo pour ton patch. Notable for modelling, lighting, composition ===== From file: Great Work! ===== From file: Great Work!