===== From : One of the better skins I've seen on poser figures. ===== From batronyx@cadronhsa.com: The lighting seems a bit flat somehow, a problem I can identify with. Overall, very decent. I like those iso-columns too. ===== From tony@awmcs.net: Neat story line. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good work on the weapons and shields. I like the variations in color of the stones (although their placement seems a bit too regular.) The columns look good, but their texture seems to obscure the detail of their carving too much. Overall, looking pretty good here. ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Turned out very well. Nice concept. I like the textures very much, the black stone stuff looks a bit grainy, the only thing i really don't like is the mortar between the bricks :-) ===== From youknow@ucan.foad.org: The spilled liquid looks more like red paint than either blood or wine (not sure which was intended), and is too far away from the fallen cup and possibly too thick. I mention this first because as one of the most brightly colored things in the scene my eyes were drawn to it and it kept intruding as I perused the rest of the scene. I like the polished floor texture. ===== From albiaprime@aol.com: Nice detail work on the weapons and the flames. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Epistemology: Not much thought on the servants' part. Whatever their god tells them? Does not seem the extent of human learning. And why does a god talk in Shkespearean English? Axiology: They seem to value what they are told, and value servitude. From the text, it is apparent that they require servants as well as are servants. It is a cyclical logic, is it not? Ontology: They are ready to be servants, as evident by the dropping of the cup and bowing. Normal people may use more caution.