===== From kingofmycastle@gmx.net: Oh Jesus, the poor boy. ===== From tony@awmcs.net: Your mist is a bit too bright. Your torches need to be brighter. Your head looks great. ===== From bfranke2@home.com: The fog works pretty well and I like the modeling of the head. Try rotating the wood grain about 89 degrees on the y axis. ===== From a.vandekraats@student.utwente.nl: Atmosphere is good. It looks really cold and wet. Two points of criticism: It looks like the bridge is hollow, because the bottom is missing; I think the boat could be a little smoother. Now there are some kinks on the edge of the boat. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: "Hyper"thermia? Overheating? I doubt it. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Unless he can swim, of course, like I would expect. Even dog paddle? But the relation to the theme is tenuous, at best.