===== From kingofmycastle@gmx.net: For a beginner..........acceptable. ===== From bfranke2@home.com: Hurts my eyes, way to many lens flares. This is a common mistake for newbies, don't let the flares dominate the image. This is a good start. ===== From youknow@ucan.foad.org: Although after reading your text file I do sort of understand the reason for it, the brightness/flare is over the top. It's visually unpleasant. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Do not be so difficult with yourself, or the viewer. You may have something to offer people after all. . .