===== From kingofmycastle@gmx.net: Nice lighting. ===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: Nice explosions and lighting. Could do with some more model details. ===== From tony@awmcs.net: The scale on your image seems a little off IMO. It looks like a minature plane flying over a room sized base with minature guns shooting at it. I think if you create smaller more frequent 'force beams' across the gate that would help. I really like your explosions though. ===== From bfranke2@home.com: It looks like you have the Pyrocluster volumetric effects plugin. The explosions are nice, but that is all we seem to have here. Try to work more on your modeling and texturing skills. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: Wow! Really exciting. I have no idea what they are fighting for, but it must be something important. However, I do have to mention that this is a good representation of the theme 'fortress', since the limited terms of actual battle indicate the dialectic between internal force and external fairly well, and a reason for the struggle is unimportant.