===== From dooby@breathemail.net: Cave floor looks good. The dragon doesn't look very fearsome though. ===== From tony@awmcs.net: Your dragon looks more like a bird. A couple of extra arms would have helped. ===== From fmurr@free.fr: Your picture appears too dark on most of the screen. you should clarify it in a software before sending it(PaintShopPro or other). ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: The theme needs work. . . fantasy is not restricted to Gygax's imagination. The floor is excellent, as it creates wonderful light and dark areas leading between points of interest. The flame the person is holding would light the person as well, which could balance the composition a little better. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: The dramatic lighting gives this a nice feel, and I love the ground. The various objects scattered around look good. The positioning of the dragon works well, although I'd prefer less of a solid green texture on it. The torch flame looks very nice. Overall, a very nice scene. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: Dragons 1, People 0? A good role-playing inspired scene. ===== From file: nice one, very detailed (i.e. have little details). i didn_t see any person, just a head.