===== From elias@users.sourceforge.net: Haha, nice mage, it almost looks like the one I made :) ===== From fmurr@free.fr: Really too dark. ===== From delfeld@mailcity.com: The image leads the eye to the bottom right, which is actually a nice composition, but it does not relate anything to the idea you have in mind. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: The lighting works well here. ===== From file: Good story, nice layout, the image should be more centered, the right area is bare.