===== From nitro_glis@yahoo.com: nice work, I would have used a different camera angle, but then again I didn't do this image :p ===== From higginsdj@bigpond.com: Nice but the focus is dead centre and too symetrical for my liking ===== From philip.chan@home.com: I like the dusty look that you have created for the scene. The buildings could use more variety in order to create the feel of a city. ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: Where you placed the camera put the viewer right in the middle of the action. Good job. The helicopter shouldn't have stationary blades. A cylinder texture just right would give a better effect. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice scene, just a bit simplistic. Figures look good, and the fog effect works well here. Additional work should help develop this into something really good. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: I like the sandy textures. And the camoflage on the soldiers. Image is a little barren -- looks like something out of a FPS game. How about adding a few doors and windows to the buildings? ===== From tm-ray@consistent.org: The people look good. The sand/dirt and wall textures seem to have suffered from your lack of time, but I'm guessing you know that.