===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Modelling and textures need work. Rather simple. ===== From matt@alledora.co.uk: Hmm, a world in a donut. Mmm... donut... ===== From topher@csh.rit.edu: Yah, you do need a bit more detail and exactly what you are trying to achieve... ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The scene could use more work to make it better. A few things I would like to see added are some land masses on the planet and possibly some mini-worlds inside the ring to emphasize the "Worlds Within Worlds" theme. The background looks nice though.