===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Modelling and textures need work. ===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: Very cool character models :) ===== From topher@csh.rit.edu: The atmosphere is nice. But a distinction between the world of school and the world out side may have been a little better (like looking through the window or something). But I do like the afternoon feel of this image. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The building is done nicely, but the length of the hall makes the school look rather empty. Maybe one or two people in the distance would have alleviated the feeling of emptyness without increasing render time all that much. If you're using windows, you might also try disabling virtual memory. If windows starts trying to use virtual memory when it isn't necessary, the render speed goes way down. (2-3PPS in my case, disabling virtual memory got it back to 40-60 PPS). ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Nice lighting and composition here. The concept is an interesting one, but I don't really feel it comes across within the scene. (More people divided into cliques like you mention would be a big improvement... a shame you didn't have time to develop it here.)