===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Nice modelling - now get the screen to light the scene. ===== From matt@alledora.co.uk: I am completely blown away by the model of the keyboard. I will be studying the source for this one to see how it's done. ===== From tlyons@gnn.com: should have changed Gateway to Povray on the kbd.....(he he) ===== From topher@csh.rit.edu: Great job on the keyboard. The wires could use a bit of attention. Take a look at the sphere_sweep object in POV-Ray 3.5. Good job overall! ===== From jjaguar@worldnet.att.net: The cables really need some more work. They look like those plastic, segmented jump ropes. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The keyboard looks excellent. The other keyboards I've seen in this round are usually farther from the camera and less detailed. The modelling of the computer and monitor are also done pretty well... Hey! Where's your mouse! :) Oh... the wires are also a little too "chunky." I assume they are made by some sort of #while loop, so it would have probably been a good idea to increase the number of cylinders used in the final render. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good work modelling the various computer components. The cords look odd... very angular in spots... normally this would be a small thing but here my eye keeps being drawn to them, and I think it detracts from the image as a whole. Conceptwise, I would have preferred to see a bit more of the outer world as well.