===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Texturing needs work. ===== From matt@alledora.co.uk: Wonderful tarmac textures here. The image as a whole might be improved slightly by using area lights to give soft-edged shadows, which would look more like real sunlight. ===== From topher@csh.rit.edu: I like how you made them look like marbles with the phong. MIB, what a great movie... ===== From jjaguar@worldnet.att.net: I'm not sure what the white objects scattered on the ground are supposed to be. Water drops? Broken glass? Feathers? ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Excellent interpretation of the theme! The highlight on the sun marble is a nice effect. One odd thing about the scene is how the chalk circle is just drawn directly over one of the rocks. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: One of my favorites for concept this round... the textures are great. Simple yet very effective.