===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Modelling and textures need work. ===== From matt@alledora.co.uk: Overall it's not bad, but it would be nice to see some more detail on the models. ===== From jjaguar@worldnet.att.net: Large signature detracts from overall image. ===== From thomas_alun@lineone.net: Would have been better with some more detail on the foregound weeds ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The earth marble looks nice. I like the effects produced by the reflection/shadows of the grass. One thing that could have improved the scene is to add some sort of normal to the sand. It looks too flat as it is. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Some nice work here. The modelling on the castle looks good, and the trees are nice, if a bit flat-looking. Why is the sand castle gray when the sandy beach isn't?