===== From the_dark_allies@hotmail.com: Good idea for the story. The room as far as we can see looks quite bare. At least the Christmas lights help add to some warmth, but they do not appear to be on except for in their reflections. I also have trouble understanding the text you have placed on the window. P.S. did you know that the letter _e_ that intersects the snowman_s eye is making him look very mad? Would you want to let this guy in your house? ===== From pokorny@attglobal.net: A friendly image which would work well on a greeting card. ===== From tom@tomandlu.co.uk: Good concept, but textures need work. ===== From lamere@speakeasy.org: What does the writing say? ===== From lrwii@joplin.com: I like the way the colored lights light up the snowman and penguin. The room could use more detail. ===== From twisted_hero@yahoo.com: hehe.. penguins.. hehehehe