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From guibaudhuin@yahoo.fr:

The water is very well done.
Composition is somewhat "chaotic"
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From trothgard@citywidesoftware.com:
I like the color choices here, nothing detracts from anything else.  I also liked the texture of the quilt on the bed.  I also liked the water lillies
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From cly@u.arizona.edu:
I do like the choice of the clouds, it goes with the dream mode. I do suggest that you spend time with your objects, especially the creatures that you are trying to modelled. Try to make the water look more like water, some ripples and tides, like what you see when you look at water. My last comment is that the blanket shows too much of the character's figure. Generally, you don't see a feet or his body, more likely that there is a body under it.



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From pokorny@attglobal.net:
Great first entry. I found the modeling strong in some part and weak in
others. The sky seems disjoint from the rest of the scene. I very much
like the contrast between the pinkish flowers and bluish grays below.

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From StephenF@whoever.com:
This is an interesting scene... does a good job of mixing 
reality with surreality to capture the chaotic essence of 
dreams.  The shaping on the quilt looks good, although 
some of the patches look a bit squashed.  The dragon 
looks good considering the method of construction... it 
works well.  I would've preferred different textures on 
the two landscape objects.  A very ambitious first entry, 
and (for the most part) very well executed.  Looking 
forward to seeing more from the artist. 

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From lrwii@joplin.com:
Good background. Everthing is place to centered.