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From trothgard@citywidesoftware.com:
The texture on the walls looks creepy and weird, I'm not sure it fits.  The colors on the executioner look too bright and cheery for a man who consistantly has to get out blood stains.  Maybe he uses all-tempeture Cheer. :)

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From cly@u.arizona.edu:
First off, I disagree with a spotlight on the executioner. I think by having it dark, makes the executioner a dark person. Secondly, I do not like the texture on of the wall. I'm not sure what is is, wood, or some abstract texture. Finally, I think more focus and detail on the faces of the two people would be a great idea to go with you dream. Maybe a tears from the eyes to make it look realistic. Oh, by the way, i think a different look to the executioner would be a better idea. Maybe a guy in a black rope with a hood, and you can't see the face, one of those 17th Century executioner.

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From robbert@mintec.ca:
Moire patterning on the walls.  Spartan and spacious accomodations considering the nature of the room.  Characters on the floor look like they're floating too much.  Plus look a little like dolls.  Although I've used spatch and must admit that the models are done pretty well for that small little program.  Good work.
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From pokorny@attglobal.net:
I like the shadows which are cast over the couple. I felt the
textures were weak and the image lacked beauty.

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From lrwii@joplin.com:
Good lighting and I like the grass. The cell walls on my 
copy look bad (I blame that on jpeg conversion) With 
such a large pov file, to bad we can't see more detail.