===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: A nice image, pretty simple to understand but with lots of details. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: Impressive image, and also quite fun to look at. I knew that there was going to be a light house, but this one is different. ===== From ojamies@cs.helsinki.fi: I think the ship doesn't realy look like a wreck, and lightning doesn't have strength. The island is great. ===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: The ship looked like it sank yesterday. Mold, rot, cobwebs... applicable with texture layers or texture_map. Otherwise awesome... the storm is a nice touch. ===== From : Quite a number of elements. I somehow realy love the sinking boat. One item you may want to fix is the lightning. It looks more like a solid stick. The sides of the island look a bit odd. But I do like this one quite a bit. ===== From awilcox@dreampeach.com: Good modelling. The height field needs more colour, I think. The water needs some work too. ===== From beighton155@yahoo.com: I like where you were coming from in this picture, but it looks too much like a childs toy set which has been left alone. ===== From ruy@hipernet.com.br: A good concept, if the topic was Myst. It doesn't strike me as a good representation of "Loneliness", though. Also, your boat and buildings could use some improvement to be more realistic. Despite my comments above, I do like the overall feeling of this pic. ===== From dapigg2000@yahoo.com: Amazing! One of my favourites. Looking at it, wonderful modelling of ALL the details, a good sky, wonderful halo, etc.. It's pretty good. Certain touches push it down artistically though... no misting, other stuff, but the modelling of the barrels in the water and the castle and the .... all make up for it. ===== From cfusner@enter.net: The texture of the heightfield seems slightly out of place compared with the water and the manmade objects, but this has a very pleasantly surreal feeling that reminds one of a fine painting. (appropriate with a Myst inspired theme... I still recall the Myst motto: "The surrealistic world that will become your reality") ===== From daffy-duck@worldnet.att.net: Try to work a little more on keeping objects proportionate to each other. ===== From tim.nikias@gmx.de: I don't think this wizard is lonely, he's more likely running amok with his power... ===== From suso@suso.org: I find it a little suspicious that you can do all the buildings, ship and island in povray, but needed to use moray for the sails of the ship. ===== From rclee@oklahoma.net: I really like the small buildings, especially the nearest one. Had a hard time understanding the material in front of the tower. The sails should be blowing in the wind. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: I can certainly see some of the Myst-like elements here. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: A complicated scene, I'm unsure what the a viewer is suppose to take away from it. An evil wizard who lures ships to their doom on a tiny island... I like the detail of all the objects in the scene, though the composition seems a little scattered. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The trees look very good, although some of them seem to have unnaturally large gaps empty of leaves. The modelling of the objects in the scene is done well from the standpoint of detail, but I find there is a lack of proportion between objects in the scene. While the human figure and the crow's-nest on the ship appear to be about the same distance away from the camera, the person is much bigger than the crow's-nest. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Good attempt at creating a complex, detailed scene. The two small buildings look good, but the castle seems rather simplistic in comparison. The ship looks good, although the sails are a bit too flat. The blue glow works well for drawing attention to the figure, but seems a little too distinct to me, especially around the edges. Nice mood overall. ===== From clem@dhol.org: Image is much too unfocussed. The "I liked oit so I put it in" method of composition is not recommended. A big problem is that no attention whatsoever was paid to proper relative sizes. The individual parts are nicely done, but they do not add up to a coherent whole. You could have helped the image with a story to provide thematic unity. Actually, when I first saw this, I thought that you were illustrating a scene from Shakesoeare's "The Tempest".