===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: It feels quite lonely but I don't really know why. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: This friendly, pretty, little garden doesn't really look lonely. ===== From darwallace@earthlink.net: The only thing I would change is the tear size--a bit large. Otherwise very good. ===== From raziel@vol.net.mt: Nice pic, but the 'tear' drops are a bit too large. Amante ===== From MarkNitschke@gmx.de: nice picture...but lonely? ===== From bfranke2@attbi.com: The water drops fro the tulip are too large. I like the sky and sun, but I find the lighting confusing. Is there more than one light source. ===== From ruy@hipernet.com.br: This doesn't seem to be a fair depiction of the topic "Loneliness". ===== From dapigg2000@yahoo.com: Good ideas. I like the whole scene and would believe it as real.... but you overexaggerated teh flower & the water droplets and the water droplets appear to be the wrong shape. Good effort, good work. ===== From tim.nikias@gmx.de: I can't really feel the loneliness in this image... ===== From suso@suso.org: Nice image. I think that your USAGE: section in your text file might conflict with the IRTC License that you agreed to by adding the IRTC COPYRIGHT: line to your text file. You might check on that. ===== From rclee@oklahoma.net: I really like your textures and the art work on the arch. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: Certainly good tasteful work for a beginner at this. My favorite part = is the subtle shades of the sky and the way it fades towards the = horizon. The plant growth around the archway is pretty good too, except = some of the tendrils seem too straight. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: A good solid scene for a beginner. Something you could work on might be composition (how the elements of your scene come together) and what story does your scene tell. While this scene looks decent, I don't find it especially evocative. ===== From jinx@spodbox.fsnet.co.uk: Very nice sky. Well proportioned scene... ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The arch looks very good - the level of detail is excellent. I find the drops of water too large and too opaque. One addition I would suggest for this scene would be to add a little water on the petals of the flower. ===== From StephenF@whoever.com: Definitely a good scene considering the experience level of the artist. The arch looks nice, as does the flower. The scale of various objects in the scene seems inconsistent, though, and the drops falling from the flower look rather simple compared to the rest of the scene. Keep up the good work, though! ===== From clem@dhol.org: Is the flower supposed to be crying? The flower textures are too plastic looking and, as you say, the water is a trouble spot. The drops are too symmetrical as well. I like the bush and the fence. The growth on the arch isn't bad either.