===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: The film grain is a nice touch, and the topic is the way I expected most raytraces to look like. Good entry. ===== From tyler@cg1.org: Nice work, but just doesn't grab me. ===== From rgow@lanset.com: I like the old look. Could use something to liven it up. ===== From matthew-bradwell@melton-mowbray.freeserve.co.uk: Too grainy for me. I like the drawings and pictures. ===== From jrcsurvey@aol.com: Gives a sense of incipient technology. Nicely achieved. ===== From irtc_mail@yahoo.co.uk: Good rendering and overall look. Composition seems repetitive. You have included the same light bulb as a sketch, a technical drawing, an object and framed illustrations. The light bulb is the least interesting object in the scene. Could this be a missed opportunity to have a light bulb as the source of light in the scene? ===== From slone@hiwaay.net: Very nice model and good image aging. Perhaps only one drawing on the right to maintain the focus on the "real" lamp. The tabletop wood texture seems a little bold and regular. Very nice metal, wood, and glass textures on the lamp and plaque.