===== From rgow@lanset.com: Nice sky and great windmill. The woodgrain on the front of the cabin looks odd, it would normally run lengthwise. ===== From leoszilard@yahoo.com: Looks a little like the Unabomber cabin. I like the windmill and the terrain. I think the shingles came out a bit bulky, and th textures on the cabin could probably be cleaned, but overall, well done. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: I really like some of the stains on the cabin. ===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: The choice of colours is very unusual and not realistic. Everything looks way too red. ===== From xilo_m@hotpop.com: You're on the right track to make beautiful images, but unfortunately you don't seem to have an artistic sense... An artistic image would have movement, would tell a story, have a past and a future... and all this in a still image... When looking at your picture, I see a very nice render of a blue-print! Try working on the concept of you future IRTC submissions! ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: The concept was good and you employ some creative strategies (neat angle on the camera, like the grass, and the colors smattered around). However, the perspective is a problem with this scene - the grass looks to be as tall as the door of the house. Iteresting home - made of stone block but in the middle of the prairie? - perhaps a sod home would fit the scene better. ===== From hildurka@simnet.is: You did a good job on the surroundings, but I can tell your enthusiasm for the topic wasn_t all that great. The cabin looks a little unfinished and out of proportions. The stone walls look good (good normal mapping) but the wooden parts don_t really look convincing. There is also something about the lighting, maybe the color is too dark, I don_t know. But the grass, also in a distance, the straws and the soil all look good. Good work on the surroundings, but the building, the main focus, suffers. The overall style is a little cartoon-like, I like it. Keep on the good work. ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: Good work on the plants. The lighting could be improved, the shadows indicate sunlight but the whole scene is very dim. The greenish 'dirt' on the house also looks somewhat strange ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Excellent work - the plants look quite realistic, and the sky also looks very good. My suggestion for improving this scene would be to add some more signs of decay to the building (particularily to the wood). The pebbles in the foreground work well to break the monotony of the earth.