===== From rgow@lanset.com: Some good work in here, but more info needed in textfile. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: Good implementation of the topic, nice background and details, and a good angle, which shows a lot about the building. ===== From tek@evilsuperbrain.com: There's something wrong with this scene but I'm not sure what it is... It should look real, because all the details are there, but something about the colours doesn't quite look right. I'm sorry I can't be more specific, but if I knew how to make scenes look photo real I'd be doing it myself! :) The sky looks rather flat, and too bright for the illumination on the building. If the building had more blue in it's shadows (e.g. using radiosity) or the sky was darker and more grey then they might match up better. The building itself is excellent. It really feels like it's been built out of separate planks of wood, because the fence in the foreground shows individual planks and naturally makes the eye see individual planks on the rest of the scene. The foreground, and the whole idea of viewing the building from the "wrong" side of the fence works fantastically and really makes the scene feel more natural. Good work. ===== From xilo_m@hotpop.com: You're on the right track to make beautiful images, but unfortunately you don't seem to have an artistic sense... An artistic image would have movement, would tell a story, have a past and a future... and all this in a still image... When looking at your picture, I see a very nice render of a blue-print! Try working on the concept of you future IRTC submissions! ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Interesting structure. I liked the angle of the camera, I think that added to your image. There is something disproportionate about the size of the grass relative to the size of the tree. Looking at the shadows it is hard to know where the sun is coming from. I think you may have too many bright lights and confused the viewer. I would suggest on an outdoor scene have a major light source and then if you need other make those more subdued. ===== From hildurka@simnet.is: This looks like somebody_s dream house. The textures are excellent, especially the wooden planks, good modelling. The outer walls look very thin though. Good work! ===== From fergie_2002_@msn.com: please more info in the text file ===== From chris_hormann@gmx.de: The lack of any description including information about the renderer is the most serious problem of this submission ===== From r@215-241.opf.slu.cz: Nice work!