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From exether@demo.xandmail.com:
Nice, but not very obvious what it is.

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From pbrasolin@yahoo.it:
If you are the first to comment critically your work
you will not make a good impression on the judges:
everyone has to learn, practice and become better and
better.
//----------------Paolo Brasolin

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From glenn@mccarters.net:
Not bad artistically, but the scene needs more details to really bring it to life.
It would help to render this image larger, like 800x600.
You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, there is nothing to be ashamed of here.

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From t.degroot@inter.nl.net:
What is it ? The scene is strangely appealing though...