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From dbn_3@yahoo.com:
(1) I like the vertical aspect ratio -- it makes the volcano and ash seem that much taller and more imposing.
(2) I like the counter and window, but the room looks very dark -- maybe radiosity bouncing the incoming sunlight around the room would help (or just some well-placed lights).
(3) The outside light looks good on the ash column, but looks very severe (like a giant fluroescent light) on the houses.
(4) All the work on the houses and fence looks great, but only points out the very flat ground -- add weeds or some normal disturbance that makes it look like grass.

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From bertram.henze@t-online.de:
Looks like a very quiet volcano - a little bit of flying debris around the summit would add more action.

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From s.day@uel.ac.uk:

Nice picture, I like the mosaic tiles. Could do with radiosity or higher quality radiosity settings.
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From p_chan@shaw.ca:
Good scene overall.  The houses are done well.  A few 
additional touches that would be nice would be some 
spilled liquid coming from the cup, more detail on the 
mountain surface (it seems rather empty now) and a 
layer of less thick smoke around the ash.

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From jyrehby@hotmail.com:
Pros: Nice modelling, excellent texture for the tiles in the foreground, interesting point of view. 
Cons: So still, so static, so lifeless... Maybe just because the window is exactly centered in the frame and the volcano right in the middle of the window?