===== From dbn_3@yahoo.com: Those buildings need some work. Break them up into different pieces and texture them differently. Try some of the built-in textures in metals.inc or woods.inc. ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Water looks good in the distance but not too realistic close to the camera. The buildings seem too close together and could use some signs of damage. ===== From bgimeno@lycos.es: Don't deliver so many physical attacks so followed, can be dangerous for your health. ===== From jyrehby@hotmail.com: Another assigment. Sky and water are very well rendered. The buildings are on the minimalist (tee hee) side. So are the explanations in the text file.