===== From dbn_3@yahoo.com: Oh, for the want of an area light! You put together a nice scene with great vegatation and water. Better lighting would really make this shine! (If the render time climbs to insane levels you could drop the fog and add focal blur instead) ===== From enrique.sahagun@uam.es: Very beautiful, not realistic but very beautiful ===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: Nicely composed scene overall. The only two things which don't seem to fit well are the moon (doesn't seem to match the level of realism of the objects) and the smoke (too bright and solid seeming). ===== From jyrehby@hotmail.com: Pros: Interesting take on the topic. Visually appealing picture with a good choice of colors and nice details. Cons: composition is a bit on the crowded side. Some stronger lines to guide the eye from the apple in the bottom left corner to the moon would help make this picture really striking. The grass is a bit plain. The falling apple seems suspended, maybe some trail behind it would help... ===== From file: Notable for modelling