===== From helene.dumur@free.fr: too dark, too small ===== From dbn_3@yahoo.com: (1) Render this larger and brighter. What is that in front of the house? (2) Turn the camera -- blocky straight-on camera shots are boring. (3) The sky looks good and I think the water is ok, but again, see (1). ===== From jyrehby@hotmail.com: Pros: a good start. Water, sky and roofs are pretty interesting. Cons: This picture is so small, dim and kind of blurred, it's hard to really tell what's going on. The houses are duplicated, at least they're of different colors. What's this white thing in front? You might provide some more information besides the obvious in the text file.