===== From helene.dumur@free.fr: Your picture is good, but too much small ===== From dbn_3@yahoo.com: The lava covers too much of the scene. Look at some pictures on google images. Or this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Kalapana_house_destroyed_by_lava.jpg ===== From bertram.henze@t-online.de: Nice lava texture, but the house is disconnected in lighting and contact shapes. ===== From enrique.sahagun@uam.es: A great effect with lava texture. ===== From jyrehby@hotmail.com: Pros: The lava texture is not bad, so are the volcano and sky in the back. Cons: Assignment anyone? This lava lake is just too flat and surrounds an oversimplified house with mirrors for windows. Shouldn't it be burning by now? You might provide some more information besides the obvious in the text file. ===== From file: Notable for textures