===== From i-mcnamara@cornellcollege.edu: Aren't while loops fun? Good modeling, especially the tiles. The texturing is ok, though I'm not sure how I feel about the rainbow effect. As for the light source you might want to try out an area light, it'll help to add to the realism of your scene. Lastly, you might want to make the composition a bit livelier by shifting the camera away from the "dead-on" perspective, it'll add a few diagonals and bit of action to the image. Good work though, and thanks for submitting. ===== From mickro.warf@laposte.net: work the crop and camera position ===== From mcavoys@aol.com: Sorry no comments but I_ve already commented the first time I voted. ===== From file: Notable for textures